fire - spinfx (dubstep) please flame?

[spin]

my first dubstep type joint, still needs a bunch of work, though i would get an opinion of you chaps befor i make it sound like a tape delay on a toilet flush...


http://www.zshare.net/audio/55804702c15aeb2a/

[spin]

hey tell me its shit, or which bits you hate? its only a new thing i knocked up... who knows?

[*catalyst]

It's not bad, breakdown was good. But I think it has heaps too much space, needs something happening in the middle. The percussion is kinda prominent.

[spin]

ok cool, this dub step thing less is more, i was a bit scared to make a big lead that wasnt bass... thanks heaps for listening.

[*catalyst]

Checkout distance - traffic, and anything from benga. Good examples of lots down low but not too spacey I suppose?

[Spherix]

i dont a have a problem with the space in this
i guess the only thing would be its in the same vein as so much other stuff - dub police etc styles

[grooki]

yeah I think the space is fine... I think it's a good track, you got the marching kind of sound really well there. True that this is a popular style, but i guess it's popular for a reason, and nothing wrong with that

[youthful_implants]

good mate I'm in it.

[spin]

thanks guys, tip of the iceberg, il pop up a finished version soon...